In the 1880’s Big Businesses discovered technology and took on immigrant workers to work in mills, factories, and sweatshops, which presented the opportunity for the immigrants to establish a better life in America and Big Businesses to gain low wage immigrant labor.
Vocabulary word Chapter 18 “Charlotte Perkins Gilman”
“Charlotte Perkins Gilman” who was a well known critic of conventional division of labor in the home, proclaimed women no longer were content to remain dependent on man.
You have an accurate content, but you seem confused about what your topic is. It isn’t the Haymarket episode and it isn’t a multiculturalism theme. It is about “The status of labor in the late 19th century, a private enterprise theme.
This topic (Topic # 12: Patriarchy and Gender Roles in Late 19th century America) relates to your content about Charlotte Perkins Gilman. So the sentence should read, “Patriarchy and Gender Roles in Late 19th century America received a powerful challenge from Charlotte Perkins Gilman and other critics who were no longer content to remain dependent upon men.”
Topic 12: Patriarchy and Gender Roles in Late 19th century America
In late 19th Century America, patriarchy led to gender roles which subjugated women to limited job opportunities resulting in work hierarchy conflicts.
As written, your sentence is inaccurate because of the confusion about the date of the election. The election of 1912 was a “reform” election, but the election of 1920 was not. Clarify the proper date of the sentence. There is another problem, however, with the topic itself. The election of 1912 is not a topic anywhere on the topic list. So the question is, why did you begin a sentence with a vocabulary term that is not on the topic list?
Part of the assignment calls for you to figure out which topic you want to write about. Your posting suggests you have some confusion about what your theme is for this content material. Since this content is about political parties shaping progressive reform, this sentence should have been posted to the role of government blog.
Between the years 1900-1910, 9 million immigrates entered the U.S. it was a distination for hope of better life for sojourners. America was appealing it had job opportunities economic advancement and commitment to freedom. The newcomers faced crowded living conditions in urban tenants and jobs in sweatshops and factories with long hours and low wages. The American-European Labor Associates was founded Colusa County 1882.
Women joined the ranks for WWII en masse under many different hats: “Rosie the Riveter”, WAC members, and comfort women to name a few, and planned on keeping their newly found independence and autonomy after the war.
As hostilities continued to work against minorities in times where the American Dream consisted of living a free life with choices in the hands of the American, minorities moved with stronger efforts towards civil rights in hopes of achieving their goals of creating an America with equality in all aspects of life.
As the growing attitude of the decline of influence by the white man began to increase, the persistence of racial conflict continued as white men felt threatened by minorities in the workforce.
Your content isn’t well aligned with your topic because the significant racial tensions did not just revolve around the workplace, although some did. Broaden the sources of racial tension to include the other venues.
The patriarchy and gender roles in the late 19th century America were transformed by the Woman’s Christian Temperance Union, led by Francis Willard, addressed a range of issues, including women’s suffrage and workers’ rights.
Well established businesses often hired immigrant workers to cut cost of labor in order to make more profits, while at the same time would also force longer labor hours for same pay or often a pay cut.
With the continual flow of immigrants from similar backgrounds many jobs in the same industry were filled by immigrants from the same country, thus creating ethnic niches which provided for the well being of immigrant communities.
The Knights of Labor organization demanded fair working conditions from employers while creating a large united front between different ethnicities in the working class.
This is a very good effort, but the content could be extended to consider the success or failure of the organization in constructing a diverse but organized labor organization.
Chinese immigrants, whose jobs were being sabotaged by white American, retaliated against this white oppression by using the American legal system and taking their concerns to court.
women liberation though accepted from majority of americans the media painted women activists as man-haters. they siezed opportunity of expressing themselves in bra-burning a way of downplaying women that there serious issues.
During the 1870s, the harsh realities of the Indian reservation system struck reformers by pointing out that the Indians would lose their entire way of life and traditions if they were confined to a reservation where the land was unsuitable for farming and living, thus making the community dependent on government.
Multiculturalism 
In the 1880’s Big Businesses discovered technology and took on immigrant workers to work in mills, factories, and sweatshops, which presented the opportunity for the immigrants to establish a better life in America and Big Businesses to gain low wage immigrant labor.
Vocabulary word Chapter 18 “Charlotte Perkins Gilman”
“Charlotte Perkins Gilman” who was a well known critic of conventional division of labor in the home, proclaimed women no longer were content to remain dependent on man.
The Haymarket Bombing was a turning point in the progress of the Knights of Labor because the organization was associated with violence.
You have an accurate content, but you seem confused about what your topic is. It isn’t the Haymarket episode and it isn’t a multiculturalism theme. It is about “The status of labor in the late 19th century, a private enterprise theme.
This topic (Topic # 12: Patriarchy and Gender Roles in Late 19th century America) relates to your content about Charlotte Perkins Gilman. So the sentence should read, “Patriarchy and Gender Roles in Late 19th century America received a powerful challenge from Charlotte Perkins Gilman and other critics who were no longer content to remain dependent upon men.”
Theme: Multiculturalism
Topic 12: Patriarchy and Gender Roles in Late 19th century America
In late 19th Century America, patriarchy led to gender roles which subjugated women to limited job opportunities resulting in work hierarchy conflicts.
Vocabulary word for Chapter 19 topic sentence “Election of 1912”.
The Election of 1920 showed all three governmental parties supporting reform.
As written, your sentence is inaccurate because of the confusion about the date of the election. The election of 1912 was a “reform” election, but the election of 1920 was not. Clarify the proper date of the sentence. There is another problem, however, with the topic itself. The election of 1912 is not a topic anywhere on the topic list. So the question is, why did you begin a sentence with a vocabulary term that is not on the topic list?
Political parties who shaped the government included conservatives, radicals and progressives also known as the liberals.
7/29/11
I am not sure where I was to post my topic sentence for chapter 19.
Jackleen Barel Hist- 11
Part of the assignment calls for you to figure out which topic you want to write about. Your posting suggests you have some confusion about what your theme is for this content material. Since this content is about political parties shaping progressive reform, this sentence should have been posted to the role of government blog.
Theme: mulicultural
Topic: Immigrants and the labor movement
Between the years 1900-1910, 9 million immigrates entered the U.S. it was a distination for hope of better life for sojourners. America was appealing it had job opportunities economic advancement and commitment to freedom. The newcomers faced crowded living conditions in urban tenants and jobs in sweatshops and factories with long hours and low wages. The American-European Labor Associates was founded Colusa County 1882.
Follow directions. What would a topic sentence about this material look like?
Women joined the ranks for WWII en masse under many different hats: “Rosie the Riveter”, WAC members, and comfort women to name a few, and planned on keeping their newly found independence and autonomy after the war.
Excellent topic sentence on new gender roles created by the war.
topic # 31
As hostilities continued to work against minorities in times where the American Dream consisted of living a free life with choices in the hands of the American, minorities moved with stronger efforts towards civil rights in hopes of achieving their goals of creating an America with equality in all aspects of life.
Your sentence could use a clearer identification of your topic from the topic list.
Topic 49
As the growing attitude of the decline of influence by the white man began to increase, the persistence of racial conflict continued as white men felt threatened by minorities in the workforce.
Your content isn’t well aligned with your topic because the significant racial tensions did not just revolve around the workplace, although some did. Broaden the sources of racial tension to include the other venues.
The patriarchy and gender roles in the late 19th century America were transformed by the Woman’s Christian Temperance Union, led by Francis Willard, addressed a range of issues, including women’s suffrage and workers’ rights.
If only it were so. Good try, but your sentence isn’t accurate as written. The WCTU challenged, but did not transform gender roles or patriarchy.
Multiculturalism:
Immigrants and new work hierarchy:
Well established businesses often hired immigrant workers to cut cost of labor in order to make more profits, while at the same time would also force longer labor hours for same pay or often a pay cut.
Good topic sentence on the role of immigrants in the labor order.
Multiculturalism and the new work hierarchy.
With the continual flow of immigrants from similar backgrounds many jobs in the same industry were filled by immigrants from the same country, thus creating ethnic niches which provided for the well being of immigrant communities.
Excellent topic sentence linking immigration steams with community development.
Topic: Multiculturalism and work heirarchy
The Knights of Labor organization demanded fair working conditions from employers while creating a large united front between different ethnicities in the working class.
This is a very good effort, but the content could be extended to consider the success or failure of the organization in constructing a diverse but organized labor organization.
Chinese immigrants, whose jobs were being sabotaged by white American, retaliated against this white oppression by using the American legal system and taking their concerns to court.
Excellent topic sentence showing the agency of the Chinese in the face of discrimination.
women liberation though accepted from majority of americans the media painted women activists as man-haters. they siezed opportunity of expressing themselves in bra-burning a way of downplaying women that there serious issues.
Follow directions and use proper punctuation. What would one topic sentence do with this material?
During the 1870s, the harsh realities of the Indian reservation system struck reformers by pointing out that the Indians would lose their entire way of life and traditions if they were confined to a reservation where the land was unsuitable for farming and living, thus making the community dependent on government.
Your sentence content is incomplete because it does not address what the “reformers” sought to do about the reservation system.